Read this poem?

Question

Have you ever wonderd what is was like to be afair

to be alive and changed

smiling in the mirror

i see the reflectrion

even thing seems so blurry know

i tend to fall

i smell the sweet breath of your name

i cant sense what everyone is saying

tommarow is a new time

i dont understand whats been through

if you only knew

i once fell in love with you but know its gone

as the floor seems to lose its way

i dont understand if its a new day

Answer 1

this is nice. it touches you. you need to revise it though. its hard to understand if you are trying to make out words.

Answer 2

This is really deep.

But honestly you need to read it over because it was a little

hard to understand, just get the language all worked out and

it will be an amazing poem. I really do like it, you should post your second draft!

Answer 3

awww...this is wonderful loves it a lot