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hello everyone I am trying to write an intro. and ad. for a clothing fashion line ... but I need it to be proof reading and writing pelaseee , thank you . the text is start after the this line :

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Hello Ladies And Gentlemen! We’re SHARA ROYALE, high class of royalty clothing brand providing comfortable, original everyday clothes that will make people look and feel HOT & SEXEY. Makes people feel the real royalty.

We have an Ongoing King and Queen Contest in which we want bring together Kings and Queens of each state throught out the whole 50 states contest, giving them the chance to present their royalty by wearing one of the Sahara Royale t-shirts and letting friends,family and the whole world vote for them to find who is the King and Queen of your state .

At the finals , the winners from every state will be going for the final contest vote to find who is the ONLY king and Queen of the United States of America .

And there’s a chance of winning $4000 cash + The king and Queen of the USA will be one of the offical modles to the Sahara Royale + the King & Queen of the USA will be getting any new fashion style from Sahara Royale free for the whole year . So why not check our website! and enter the contest right now!

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  1. s**y -- spelled wrong up there

    Makes people feel like real royalty. (sentence 2) (added "feel")

    Change "throught out" to "throughout"

    Capitalize "King" in the third and fourth paragraphs.

    Make sure you don't leave extra spaces before the period at the end of each sentence.

    Good luck!

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