Thoughts on this poem please?

Question

A flame waiting to be tamed.

A wild heart waiting to be tamed.

I have a flame so high.

While it burns, it lights the night sky.

My heart yearns to know.

The love you continue to show.

As my flame continues to grow.

A love my heart surely knows.

With every waking moment it glows.

This flame can not be contained.

It is lit by a wild heart awaiting to be tamed.

It grows each and every day.

In so many ways.

It is waiting for you.

Who ever you are that is out there to sooth my soul.

Before this flame gets out of control.

My heart yearns to know.

The love you continue to show.

As my flame continues to grow.

Glowing like the sun.

This flame awaiting to be contained.

By the love in which you gave.

Sitting and waiting for thee,to come and rescue me.

A flame waiting to be tamed.

Answer 1

good... it stays talking about the same subject shows gradual change and has rhythm