Twilight deck. Please rate?

Question

hello iam trying to build a twilight deck please rate and suggest what i should change. all suggestion will be put int thought

Thx

-Monsters-

2x light and Darkness dragon

2x Dark lord zerato ( Must have at least one)

1x d-hero dasher

1x dmoc

1-2x shadow monarch

1x jinzo

1x disc commander

1x Armageddon knight

1-2x dark grepher

1x stratos

1x spirit reaper

1x card topper

1x snipe hunter

1x sangan

1x d-hero fear monger

2x cyber valley

1-2x cyber dragons

3x giant germ

1x phantom of chaos

-Magic-

1x brain control

1x mst

1x heavy storm

2x trade in

1x fires of dooms day

1x monster reborn

1x premature burial

1x lighting vortex

2x allure of darkness

2x reinforcements

-Traps-

1x escape from the dark dimension

1x limit reverse

1x mirror force

1x return from the different dimension

2x Phoenix wing wind blast

Unfortunately i won't be able to get:

-Destiny draws

-DADs

I want them bad but they are to expensive.

What do u suggest any help is appreciated.

Answer 1

MORE MAGIC'S AND TRAPS!!!

You have way too many monsters and not enough magic and traps.

Take out a couple of those not so great monsters and replace them with some really good trap cards.