What Do You Think Of This..???

Question

I know a lot of you wont read it and I know this is in the wrong section. But I know most people go here and I'd really like an opinion on my story. I don't mind rude comments I just as k for a reader with an opinion :)

Thanks

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Answer 1

It's is a great start. Keep at it. Have someone correct your spelling and grammar though.