What do u think of this?

Question

i look through the glass

and what do i see?

it's this image of you and me.

i strain my eyes

to get a better look.

and disappointment

the image brings

old memories of a horrid end

and beautiful beginnings.

it started with a smile

a hug

a pationate kiss

and ended with a scream

a shrug

a dark abyss.

angry, ashamed,

i break the glass.

altogether miserable

i miss the past.

Answer 1

That's really good.  The only thing I would change is the third line.  

it's this image of you and me.

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It's an image of you and me.

It's a really good poem though!

Answer 2

this is really good! i love it

Answer 3

u wrote this it amzing hun