Yet another new poem

Question

Recently written, very short, did it fast so not sure if it is good or not =p

The scent of a person that I pass by

The scent of the seasons that pass me by

I can feel your love for me no matter where I go

For this my love grows

Even if we must end one day

I will fight for your love

Till the very end of time

Answer 1

awee thats cute :)

Answer 2

i like it

:)

Answer 3

I would feel somewhat ashamed if i were you.

But it's not a bad poem. Keep on doing what you like.