..do you like my poem?

Question

what do you think? any suggestions? thanks..oh&&btw im 11.

Be happy.

Be grateful.

Take in the moment.

Remember the details.

At all those awkward moments.

Angry times.

And when you think the last thing you will be doing is smiling.

Smile.

Laugh.

Be careless.

Just remember tomorrow will be a better day.

Things could be worse.

There aren’t many of these moments.

You can’t relive it once it’s over.

But you can make more.

Enjoy life…

Make friends.

Fall in love.

Life isn’t short.

It’s just beginning.

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Answer 1

yea.

it really good.

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Answer 2

It has good rhythm to it, and is catchy. From a poem lover..I like it. Why not show off this poem to other people? A good site is http://www.writing.com

Answer 3

it is a ASWESOME and wonderful poem

Answer 4

Hallmark called --they wants their sayings back