Requesting help from married readers of erotica?

Question

I am writing an erotic novel length story (for a website, not necessarily to be published in book form). In this novel an FBI agent is pursuing a sexual deviant (involved with many of our taboos involving s*x). However this deviant has influenced others in the town into taking up a similar lifestyle. Therefore I imagine having scenes that would not necessarily have either the protagonist or antagonist in them. Because of this I am not sure how to structure the book (i.e. how do I write scenes where neither main character is present). The scenes are important as it shows the effect the deviant is having on the town. Any suggestions from married readers of erotica?

Answer 1

Sounds like you have a lot of work ahead of you.

i am also in prosess of writing short erotica stories for a well known publisher...and get stuck from time to time with ideas.

the answer will come to you , when you're least thinking of it, good luck

Answer 2

Why would it have to come from only married readers???

Anyway, one solution would be to have had the deviant infiltrate various areas of the community and install cameras; the scenes are being recorded and watched by the deviant.  He wouldn't be physically present in the scene, but you could still incorporate it as either a voyeuristic sensation (he's watching it as it occurs) or as something he watches when he's done doing what he does for the day and isn't off corrupting the town's people.

Answer 3

I'm currently writing a novella for a romance publishing house.  I think if you use the 3rd person omniscient, you can act like God and be the all-seeing eye throughout your story, knowing what's going on right in front of you, as well as miles away.

Answer 4

Good for you honey

Answer 5

have the deviant talk from the future like they are going to explain it in third person... this will help make it clear whats going on...  

Answer 6

Yes.

Everyone gets high and they have a grand ol' F**KFEST.......and then Otis the town drunk pisses on everyone and puts out the flames of desire.

THE END.

Answer 7

ROFLMAO.... Val.... you're too much for me sometimes!!!!

As for me, I would suggest a club scene with a threesome or something, right then and there. Or, in a booth at a restaurant... Who knows, maybe even on a roller coaster? You can get pretty wild ideas since its a book. ;-)