Requesting some feedback maybe a little C&C [post-mod poem]?

Question

I'd like to hear some honest opinions on this piece. Tell me what you got out of reading it. How did you react to the style, pace, and language of this poem. What do you think this poem is about?

http://shortnbitter.googlepages.com/electroscape1

Answer 1

That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have a rare talent, wow!