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Rough draft, my poem, please comment/suggest?

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Insanity

Born from the cess

In the back of your mind

A presence being built

That isn’t so kind.

You are what you consume

And this thing will eat

Anything you can’t fathom,

What your mind can’t beat

Soon it will talk

Don’t panic, or be scared

It is just the You

Who does what you never dared

Listen obediently

This is the real you,

No need for caution

It will soon be through

Embrace the madness

Think of it as a gift

From reality’s bounds

You are lift

To society

You are a bane

But they dont know

The Bliss of the Insane

For some other stuff i wrote, look up my questions in my profile if yah like this one

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  1. I love it. Bloody brilliant! So evocative and the imagery? Wow! Wonderful work...thank you for sharing!

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