Rough(grammar blah dee blah)... what do you think?

Question

a strong willow tree rooted deep stand in thick grass. Brilliant wildflowers bright as young children's eyes roll as the crisp air flows through the meadow. A man stands tall and still, mirroring the tree. The scene is a dream. all of it is real. at least to this man. his dreams are vivid and he can walk through the deepest ones. it might be an oasis with vines hanging like fresh white linen over water still as glass. honey suckles growing like weeds so tangled and rich. their sweet pearls hidden inside for only a few to ever taste. or maybe just a little white house standing, overlooking a mighty ocean so powerful it could take you and in and never let you out with tow headed babies running with fat rain cloud sheep.

Answer 1

Love the analogies. The wildflower/children's eyes, the man mirroring the tree and especially the rain cloud sheep.

A nicely painted word picture.

Answer 2

When you put it in a block like that it's difficult to read.