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SUPER DUPER EASY question!!! 10 points giveaway!?

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Hiya ppls! My cousin published this poem and she wanted to see if ppl on the net lyked it. Her net is down so she told me to publish it on the net too! No cussing if u want 2 give the poem a bad rating:

On spring days,

the flowers and trees relive again,

and inhales the carbon dioxide

to unpollute the Earth a bit

to show its beauty.

On summer days,

the sun kisses the nature

with its rays of light.

On autumn days,

the wind whispers to the

nature of the earth.

On winter days,

the snows breathes its icy breath on the trees,

which lets the trees exhale carbon dioxide,

which pollutes the Earth once more.

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  1. I like the concept. If I had one criticism at all it's that maybe a line could be added to summer and fall. Overall, it is beautiful and think it is lovely and what I needed to read tonight.

    About her age, I am going to assume she's younger only because you asked it, and go with 9-11. She should keep at this. She has a gift that can turn into something great as she matures. Writing is a great form of expression.


  2. Hey i liked this poem so i thought id come and say that lol

    v4 was i think the better one of them all, but still pretty well done ,but yea i say keep it up :) and in no time ur cousin could be a famous poem writer :P

  3. i dont lyk some of the words she used.,but the concept is really nice.......,i thnk ur cousin is still young.,lyk 12 or somethng,.

  4. The poem which mixes the nature with science is good.Hence your cousin (probably 16 years old) can give the title 'natural science' to the poem.

  5. I really like the concept and pretty much how she did it. The wording just needs a little tweaking.

  6. not a good poem, i mean it could be better if she reword especially in parts where she talks about pollution, i personally dont like it, needs much work but just by taking the pollution parts it can improve

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