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Sad........ is this clear? Is the meaning too murky?

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Sad

broad valley

between us

listless, brooding

vague and misty.

Warm distant vistas

faint and fading

We leave behind

an edge of

indecision.

Snow in

mornings eye

ahead,

Ashes.

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  1. No, the meaning is not to murky. I am enthralled by the imagery of the last four lines. The snow drifting down so beautiful on the wind, the ash from the volcano that will destroy all you've lived for. Beautifully stated in your title. Sad.


  2. Is your meaning if we can't decide what we want, we get nothing or that there is nothing ahead of us and nothing to turn back to?

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