Sad poem that I wrote?

Question

Empty Handed

The wind blows across my hair

As I stare infinitely out, without a care

The fall below is far but not as far as my heart will go

"Empty handed I entered this world and so shall I leave it"

Just so you all know Im not sad, or suicidal, quite the opposite in fact. I just wrote a sad poem for fun. Hope you all enjoy it.

Answer 1

i need points

Answer 2

i love the poem!!!! i dont write them so i dont know how hard it is!!!! but in seconed grade i remember having to write a poem and recite it infront of everybody =( but that was ok.... at least you dont have to recite it.....lol

Answer 3

Just phrases with line breaks.

Answer 4

Amazing poem!!  You have good word choice and it rhymes. Most importantly it has deep meaning.  You are talented, great poem!!  I write deep poems sometimes too but i'm not depressed either, they're not nearly as good as that though!