Scotty & Lottie part V: Any good?

Question

Night-night

Appetites sated and bellies full,

Scotty and Lottie hop-plop home

with drowsy eyes

and dragging tummies

they roll on onto the den...

Scotty: Well, ya believe me now, don' cha? Isn't it splendid?

Lottie: I do, I do! It was a wonderful feast!

S:(Settling into his recliner with the TV remote.) I'm so stuffed I can't move. Lemme sit for a minute...(Eyes drifting closed)

L: Hmmph! Well at least I didn't gorge myself.(Looking self conciously at her tummy).

S: You're supposed to get bigger for babies and winter. Don't worry.....Eeeeerp!

L: Ish. Don't forget to brush your teeth, Scotty, you know what mum said...'Ignore your teeth and they'll go away.'

S:Mmm-hmmm....

Answer 1

"Hi!,"

Good evening nope morning to yah. as it's 2 minutes past midnight.

Well, that was a lovely little bouncing, Bunny story hopefully soon will have another flock of little bubbly bouncing Bunny's to enjoy running around your garden. eating all your vegetables before you get to eat them. does yours do that?

They're so cute and adorable ain't they.

Give scotty and Lottie a cuddle from me, my arms can't stretch out that far.

Good night all. : )

Answer 2

You are a comic genius.....I know people say they rolled about laughing....that didn't happen....but, this is the truth I'm writing now .....I'm reading along, loving it, and get to the line about the recliner and the TV remote, and burst out laughing.

Do you know, I recognise Scotty's voice.....he's Thumper's great, great, great grandson (well, perhaps a few more greats, considering the fecundity of rabbits)

(And I would never ignore you - you always make my day)

Answer 3

For some reason, I'm feeling stuffed.  Delightful poem of the continued escapades of Scotty and Lottie.

Answer 4

wonderful

some more laugh with bountyful

Good approach for a good poem

all and they will like and fetch you a fame

Answer 5

Veggie chewing you are with this continuing tale!  Well done.

Answer 6

Very little seems to be working on Y!A lately.  A cheerful, morning poem. (One suggestion: delete "on" from L5).

Answer 7

wow are they the rabbit's??

Answer 8

So, are they going to go back. I know you, and the garden of suspense still awaits our two intrepid bunnies does it not? As usual, you have me laughing and wanting more. Thanks, Reenie.

Answer 9

Bunnies as funny as kitties!  Is there a typo in L.5?

Should it be "They roll on into the den..."?