See any improve in Warrior deck?

Question

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thats what i had and this is what i did with it to make it more warrior appropriate and beatdown. Pllz tell me if it works

Monsters (23)

Black Luster Soldier

Fierce Gia the Swift Knight

Warrior Lady of the Wasteland

Giant rat x2

Zombyra the Dark

Gigantes x2

Mystic Swordsman lv2

Mystic Swordsman lv4

Mystic Swordsman lv6

Blade Knight

Goblin Attack Force

Familiar knight

Pitch-Black Warwolf

Command Knight

Obnoxious Celtic Guardian

Millenium Shield

Sword Hunter

Gearfired the Iron Knight

Marauding Captain x2

Spell (12)

Lightning Vortex

The Warrior Returning Alive x2

Reinforcements of the Army x2

Brain Control

Monster Reborn

Gia Power

Legendary Sword

Black Luster Ritual

Pot of Avarice

Traps (8)

Sakuretsu Armor x3

Magic Cylinder

Torrential Tribute

Bottomless Traphole

Rivaly of Warlords

Hidden Book of Spell

Please tell if it is good enough to take to a hobby league and rate 1-10

Answer 1

well... i dunno cause my warrior deck is quite different from this but i have all of theses cards so i'll make this deck and compare it's strength. i'll get back to you later