See if my yugioh deck is good enough to duel? Thanks guys!?

Question

Monsters:

Ultimate Tyranno

Evil hero Malicious Edge

Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon

Red eyes B. Dragon

Gladiator Beast Andal

Aztekipede, The Worm Warrior

DawnBreak Garnda

Black Veloci

Gemini Lancer

Crystal beast emerald tortoise

Alien Shocktrooper

Cannon Soldier Mk-2

Castle Gate

Grasschopper

Caius The shadow monarch

Earth effigy

Black luster soldier- envoy of the beginning

La jinn the genie of the lamp

Imprisoned queen archfiend

Gladiator beast darius

Indomitable fighter lei lei

Golden Homunculus

D.D. survivor

Dark crusader

Destiny hero dunker

Kycoo the ghost destroyer

Blue eyes white dragon

Bazoo the soul-eater

Blue thunder T-45

Cyber ogre

Volcanic slicer

Exiled force

Magna-slash dragon

Archfriend general

Trap:

Jar of greed

Dark coffin

Bottomless trap hole

Torrential Tribute x2

Sakuretsu armor

By order of the emperor

Magic jammer x2

Legacy of yata garasu

Spell:

Tribute to the doomed

nobleman of crossout

mystical space typhoon

dark core

lightning vortex

big bang shot

Tornado

Answer 1

Its basically a mess, I agree with the previous answerers, get a theme, branch of that theme, limit deck to 40-45 cards and keep consistant ratios.

Answer 2

First off i must say to decide on a theme you have completely conflicting cards that don't go together, Crystal beasts cyber monsters and dragons and dinos and archfiends and Macro deck cards such as bazoo and kycoo don't belong togather

also try to limit your cards to 40 so you can actually pull off some combos

you should check the new List for forbidden and limited cards for example

Legacy of Yata garasu is forbidden i think

Torrential tribute is limited to 1

Black luster soldier- envoy of the beginning is forbidden

Also no offense but  this deck does not seem well planed out.

Try this site for help yugioh.wikia.com/

that should help you decide on a theme or style, personally my  deck style is Cyberdark which is hard to pull of. but who knows what yours will be in the future

Answer 3

ok first of all some of those cards r banned and some u cant use 2 or 3 or even 1 and this deck is to scattered and random with junk cards thrown in stick to 1 theme then look up that theme then build ur deck off that

Answer 4

Are you joking... nobody's played yugioh since they were ..like.. seven. There are better things to do to spend your time. But... you obviously spend a lot of time with them... so... i think some of the names are cool...sorry... i'm trying not to be mean... You probably know what your doing if you spent all that time writing this list...