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hi i just wanted to hear what you guys think of one of the poems I've recently written while i was bored. PLEASE no ***-hattery here i don't really need it. I know that the punctuations in my grammar are pretty much non existent so please don't comment on that just look at the words and tell me if you feel them or not..please be honest just not too brutal aha =Phere goes nothing..the title is I Don't:i don't understand youmaybe i never willwhy were you never thereyou've failed to notice all the things inside me hurt for youyou're attentionbut why was it me that was affected..by you being selfishyou only care about yourselfyou always willnow that you've gotten so sick so quickly you want me to be therecause you know you're all alonei can't do that and get attached againdon't you understand what it does to me?you're too blind to see the only one you're hurting is me maybe i should be therei don't know when your final days arei don't even know if your still herei hope and pray before the day comes you'll see ALL that you've done to memy inside's will never purely become what they once wereI've rotted from the inside out without you there to seeyou didn't even call me you came once when i was sick yetyou blew me off for a business tripI've lost a lot yet you don't seem to carethe empty promises don't go unnoticedthe tone of you're voice says it all to medon't lay it outyou don't have to say itif you don't want it don't have itbut think again when you want me by your bedsideso i can ease your pain you've never done anything for me so don't expect warm hugs and all the attentionwhen it all goes to **** you only have yourself to mention.anyway here it is
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