okay, so i have to write an entry on a friend for school. tell me, does this sound good? is the semicolon in the right place, does the sentences flow together nicely? opinions?
"You're definitely one of mine too. Another two hour phone call is overdue indeed! You keep me laughing and on my toes. You're also not afraid to tell me when I'm being stupid, in the wrong; or offer advice. Safe to say, you're almost always right. Not to mention you're incredibly kind, caring, with a strong personality to back it up. I love you to death, truly."
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