s*x scenes help?writing a story need more scene ?

Question

im writing a story and i need some s*x scene or something interesting, just give me the basic or an outline..and i can add the details.

Answer 1

I find it's better to read if it's not described in great detail. If it is, it seems like some crappy $0.25 romance paperback. Just say something like, "He followed her retreating back into the bedroom, taking off his shirt in the process." Then cut to the next morning.

Answer 2

Which type of s*x story are you writing? One where the only purpose is for the reader to get off? If so lots of explicit details on how he touches and kisses her, the way he feels inside of her, etc. Avoid cliches though.

Now on the other hand if you want your reader longing for the couple to get some action, then throw obsticles in their way. Make them have to work to get in bed. Some examples: Some sort of room malfunction (heat is stuck on too hot to do anything), The had to bring their kids along and keep getting interrupted before they can get very far. Perhaps for some reason they had to come down separately and got different information on when they'd be staying or which room. I think you can see the types of things I am getting at. This approachcan build a richer longer story, that is more than just a stroking story. You still can use the descriptions from above once they get to the final act (and the smaller interuptions) by the way to tease us (and the poor characters)

Good luck with the writing.

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Answer 3

Who are the characters and what are they like? Are they in love? Total strangers? How old are they?

Answer 4

Begin with a passionate entrance then watch some movies with those kinds of scenes to give you ideas

Answer 5

Henry used the key under the mat

to enter Maggie's house.  He

tipped around, made himself a

ham sandwich, and gobbled

down ice tea.

He eased upstairs, saw Maggie

slip off her skirt.  She unbuttoned

her blouse....