Short Poem - Comments?

Question

Hoodies are fools thats not us

Playing music on the back of a bendy bus

They spit and shout and diss and cuss

We dont want to cause such a massive fuss

We just want to live out lives

Not get in to trouble with guns and knives

We get thrills from Rollercoasters

Not spraying Graffiti all over posters

Going around mugging old ladies

Age of 13 having lots of babies

So next time you see us - dont hesitate to speak

A simple "Good Morning" would do us a treat

Changes welcome - Thank You

Answer 1

the 1st n the 6th verse don't sound so nice. to see your faults try and read it out once quickly

Answer 2

you sound so cool, you tell such truth,

not all teenagers are uncouth.

You've paved the way to make us think.

Keep going with the pen and ink!!!!!

Answer 3

It seems more a newspaper report than a poem but keep trying ~~

Answer 4

I like it.