Short Poem...Tell me what you think Thanks!!?

Question

I'm myself and you are me,

There is way to many ways to feel unloved.

I'm inside a shell that I like to call myself,

But I'm lying, yeah, I'm so bad at lying.

I wrote you a poem and I sent it away,

It crashed upon the shore like a giant wave.

I wave good bye as the terminal speaks,

'The last plane's departure is forever hold your peace"

Answer 1

That poem it's good

That lst line don't know if I would

Write such a phrase

But it is in front of my face

I often am trapped in a shell

And often I just want to yell

Let me live Let me be myself

Putting  my feeling on a shelf

Doth me not any good

It's hard  to do as I would

I seldom get my way

Cause of what others say

II need to do as I please

My life is not at ease

Often shaking be my knees

With anger I hide my dis-ease

Bullies, insulters about

Cause me to yell or shout!

Answer 2

I think this has been a much bigger improvement from the last poem I read from you.

I really see what you are saying with both parts, except it seems like they are two separate stories.

Answer 3

I love the first line and hate the rest of the first stanza but I like the last stanza.

Answer 4

I think that after the first verse the second verse is something completely different. Like there isn't a connection between the two.. Maybe that's just me though!