Short letter to British Gas.. Help!?

Question

Hello! can you correct this short letter for me please? (Grammar Sintax). Thank you.

RE: request account details

1) On ..... 2008 morning I rented the flat on ...... (address).

On ...... 2008 afternoon, I called the costumer service giving my details, phone number and the meter reading to open a new account for both gas and electricity.

2) I woul like to notify that I'm still waiting the welcome letter with my account detail from British gas or any other comunication concerning this matter.

3) Please contact me at the above address or via phone at ........(phone number) to discuss this matter further and/or to let me know when I will get my account details.

4) Thanks for the attention,

Yours faithfully,

Answer 1

The grammar is ok as it's an informal letter but the spelling needs checking!,

i.e. customer not costomer

would not woul

also 'still waiting FOR the welcome letter.

Another bit of advice based on experience: DON'T have any dealings with British Gas, they are completly useless and have very bad customer services.