Short prose poem. What do you think of it?

Question

A thousand strands of bound thread envelop her neck and continue upward toward their destiny.

Each fibre, tied securely to a glass chandelier abundant with fragile, light giving tears.

She stands alone, staring down the spiral of her past, as her gaze fixes intently on the position if the chair in which she stands precariously.

Her body trembles with fear, as pangs of uncertainty plague her insanity.

Answer 1

not very interesting. try to short your phrases. make it lo like this

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taht is an example of good poem styles

Answer 2

It felt pretty wordy for what you were saying, the words were nice ones but I want more content..

Answer 3

I really liked this, the imagery was very good. I would change "the chair in which she stands" to "the chair on which she stands", but the rest is great