Should i hand this in to my teacher or not? thanks!?

Question

I want to tell her,

but i dont have the guts,

i want to tell her,

but she might think im nuts.

i go to tell her,

its on the tip of my tongue,

the pain of her not knowing,

its like my neck is being rung,

im not sure what to do,

this feeling, this love,

its all so new,

shes always on my mind,

i just need to find,

the way,

to come out of my shell,

is it really this hard just to tell?

I want to tell her,

but i dont have the guts,

i want to tell her,

but she might think im nuts.

what can i do to make it better? good? bad?

not worrying aobut spelling and c**p at the moment. cheers

Answer 1

It's a really good poem. Good work!

Answer 2

thats actually good:P poetry sucks  

Answer 3

wow actually it's not bad! you should turn it in :)

Answer 4

i like it!

Answer 5

It's acceptable if you are under 12. By the way how is Phil McKraken?