Should this poem go in the trash or should I work on it more?

Question

The Caterpillar

For countless days and endless nights

I’ve crawled through the leaves,

eaten holes in them all-

tasted the bitterness of herbs

and the sweetness of flowers.

Whatever life fed me

I’ve chewed it all thoroughly,

and let it ferment in my belly.

I’ve labored hard,

and spun my new home-

Now leave me alone!

It’s hard work being this still

and this solitary;

and God only knows,

If and when

I should decide to come out,

whether I’ll be an ugly moth

or a magnificent butterfly.

I don’t really care either way,

as long as my wings

can tread over air

and lift me high above

this earthly prison.

Answer 1

i never throw potential poems in the trash.....u never know what might start out as a bad idea and become something great

Answer 2

you could change the name of it otherwise i think its wonderfull

Answer 3

Wow.  That SUC--- its way good.  Just kindin about it sucking.  Its good. Work with it.