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Simplicity?

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I am no martyr, not quite a saint;

I am no sinner to hold endless blame.

I am just a person with guilt as my guide,

Pain as my compass, confusion as path.

If you wish to guide me to radiance and light,

Do, please, confide me, the meaning of life.

It's short I know, but I'd appreciate comments about it.

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  1. add few motivational words


  2. Thats really good! I love it!

  3. Nice. To me this reads better:

    "I’m no martyr, nor yet quite a saint  

    I’m no sinner to hold endless blame

    I’m just a person, guilt is my guide

    Pain my compass, confusion my path

    If you wish to guide me

    To radiance and light

    Do confide me, a meaning to life"

  4. In this I am really stunned. It is really sublime
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