Since everyone seems to be doing this, how do you like my poem?

Question

Caught - in a desultory dreaming -

One begins to catch glimpses of a Gleaming,

That, were it mere light,

Would dazzle our sight,

But instead is the Start of all seeing

Constructive criticism welcomed, but if you say you hate it, tell me why. And keep in mind that I'm a Sensitive Little Girl.

*sniff* *pout*

Okay, I'm nearly six feet tall and I'm 14, so not exactly little, but the "sensitive girl" part still applies.

Answer 1

awesome

Answer 2

I think its pretty good for you only being 14. But if your so sensitive then maybe you shouldn't ask questions like this unless you are prepared to just take anything that comes at you.

Answer 3

i read your poem and laughed into a fit

the fact of the matter is it really was ****

when you wrote that, you were the one dreaming

and after i read i was the one screaming

a sensitive little girl

in a sensitive little world

6 feet tall? **** ima go hurl

so stop killing the site we call yahoo answer

it's like the site is a body and your poem is the CANCER.

Answer 4

I love it!!!=^-^=

Answer 5

What kind of a jerk is Jack C?!! More like Jack A$$! He knows nothing. I doubt very much he is even literate.

Answer 6

Most of the poems posted on here are trash. But this is the first time I am impressed.

Very good poem.

I am not experienced with the measure or rhyme  or any of the technical aspects of a poem--so I'm not going to say such aspects are good (simply because I don't know).

But I enjoy the thought that underscores your poem.

Very good.

Impressive for only being 14. You seem much smarter than you should be at that age.

Good luck!