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So, what (if any) emotion does this evoke in you?

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yes, us people are just poems

we're 90% metaphor, with a leanness of meaning

approaching hyper-distillation

and once upon a time

we were moonshine, rushing down the throat of a giraffe

yes, rushing down the long hallway

despite what the p.a. announcement says

yes, rushing down the long stairs

with the whiskey of eternity, fermented and distilled

burning down our throats

down the hall

down the stairs

in a building so tall, that it will always be there

yes, it's part of a pair there on the bow of noah's ark

the most prestigious couple

just kickin back parked

against a perfectly blue sky

on a morning beatific in its indian summer breeze

on the day that america

fell to its knees, after strutting around for a century

without saying thank you

or please

and the shock was subsonic, and the smoke was deafening

between the setup and the punch line

cuz we were all on time for work that day

we all boarded that plane for to fly

and then while the fires were raging

we all climbed up on the windowsill

and then we all held hands

and jumped into the sky

and every borough looked up when it heard the first blast

and then every dumb action movie was summarily surpassed

and the exodus uptown by foot and motorcar

looked more like war than anything i've seen so far

so fierce and ingenious

a poetic specter so far gone

that every jackass newscaster was struck dumb and stumbling

over 'oh my god' and 'this is unbelievable' and on and on

and i'll tell you what, while we're at it

you can keep the pentagon, keep the propaganda

keep each and every tv, that's been trying to convince me

to participate

in some prep school punk's plan to perpetuate retribution

even as the blue toxic smoke of our lesson in retribution

is still hanging in the air

and there's ash on our shoes

and there's ash in our hair

and there's a fine silt on every mantle

from h**l's kitchen to brooklyn

and the streets are full of stories, sudden twists and near misses

and soon every open bar is crammed to the rafters

with tales of narrowly averted disasters

and the whiskey is flowin

like never before

as all over the country

folks just shake their heads, and pour

so here's a toast to all the folks who live in palestine

afghanistan

iraq

el salvador

here's a toast to the folks living on the pine ridge reservation

under the stone cold gaze of mt. rushmore

here's a toast to all those nurses and doctors

who daily provide women with a choice

who stand down a threat the size of oklahoma city

just to listen to a young woman's voice

here's a toast to all the folks on death row right now

awaiting the executioner's guillotine

who are shackled there with dread and can only escape into their heads

to find peace in the form of a dream

cuz take away our playstations

and we are a third world nation

under the thumb of some blue blood royal son

who stole the oval office and that phony election

i mean

it don't take a weatherman

to look around and see the weather

jeb said he'd deliver florida, folks

and boy did he ever

and we hold these truths to be self evident:

#1 george w. bush is not president

#2 america is not a true democracy

#3 the media is not fooling me

cuz i am a poem heeding hyper-distillation

i've got no room for a lie so verbose

i'm looking out over my whole human family

and i'm raising my glass in a toast

here's to our last drink of fossil fuels

let us vow to get off of this sauce

shoo away the swarms of commuter planes

and find that train ticket we lost

cuz once upon a time the line followed the river

and peeked into all the backyards, and the laundry was waving

the graffiti was teasing us

from brick walls and bridges

we were rolling over ridges ,through valleys

under stars

i dream of touring like duke ellington

in my own railroad car

i dream of waiting on the tall blonde wooden benches, in a grand station aglow with grace

and then standing out on the platform

and feeling the air on my face

give back the night its distant whistle

give the darkness back its soul

give the big oil companies the finger finally

and relearn how to rock-n-roll

yes, the lessons are all around us and a change is waiting there

so it's time to pick through the rubble, clean the streets

and clear the air

get our government to pull its big d**k out of the sand

of someone else's desert

put it back in its pants, and quit the hypocritical chants of

freedom forever : )

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  1. Annoyance.


  2. It's definitely thought provoking, and whoever wrote it is obviously peed off.  I'll be reading that again to make sure I take it all in.    

  3. A very biting rant against society today...very nice NoBoys...

    And yes I did read the whole thing, it sort of made me sad because it's so true. Did you write that?  

  4. lazy.

    i cant sit here and read all that.  

  5. Very thought provoking!!

    Did you write this, It's very deep and evoked sadness, poignant picture created from these words...it was awakening; a light to what society has become

  6. Confusion..

  7. For all you MORONS who can't be bothered, or don't have the ability, to sit for just a few minutes and read a wonderfully written spoken word piece...you guys missed out.

    Anyway, to answer the question.  I really enjoyed it, it made me a little angry, made me laugh more than once and made me feel a bit ashamed of my country's government.  Thanks for the spot of intelligence this morning.

  8. annoyance most def.....its so long.just when i thought i was about  to be done, bam another line and then another.lol.

    edit: lol i just read the last part with the government thing..lmao..thats so kick ash.

  9. This is a spoken word piece written by Ani Difranco, look for it on Utube, she is one of my favorite performers, a little surprised more of you don't know who she is. Bi-sexual punk folk artist, fiercely independent, political, funny, and a bit twisted in a mostly good way. I have seen Ani several times in concert and if you haven't seen her live you don't have a real grasp on her music in my opinion. But onto what feelings this song evokes in me. Sadness and anger. Politicians are so ridiculously self serving, they take everything that is right and good about this country and find a way of marring it in ugliness and greed. The things that happened that lead up to 9/11 were building up for 30 years. So each party has it's own agenda, just never seems like that agenda is truly for the people.

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  10. For me, the poem it's self provokes several different emotions.  Anger, sorrow, something that makes me want to stand up and shout "Right on sister" lol  

    Some of the responses here provoke sadness, they are reminders that this planet is littered with self absorbed, shallow, non-thinking people and that frustrates the h**l out of me!

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