So I wrote this poem and would like if you can comment on it and rate it and leave suggestions...? thanks!!!!!

Question

Words

Words recycled reused and destroyed,

Words that mean nothing like happy and joy,

Words that are borrowed for this and that,

Their meanings deflated and they become flat,

Words that are vulgar we fire around,

When used harshly bring even the strongest man down,

Words that tell stories we'd rather forger,

Words we purge when we should digress,

Words that spark riots,

Words that spark wars,

Words written in blood,

Words misheard,

Words with histories predating our own,

Their meanings evolving not written in stone,

But words are just letters in alphabet soup,

They float around here and there,

But they are neither here nor there.

By: Trevor Schumann

Answer 1

Its deep and I love it. I snapped at the end for ya. Keep up the good work.

Answer 2

it's very unique, but sounds more like a really drawn out riddle!!

Answer 3

Very nice! I like it a lot. Some of the rhymes are a little rough but the meaning is sound which is the thing that counts the most.

Answer 4

love it.  

I have to admit that the ending is really awkward, though.

this says so much, in so little words.

you have a real gift, here.  don't waste it.  seriously.

Answer 5

I think it is pretty good, but the last few lines are not in sync with the rest of the poem.

Answer 6

DEEEEEPPPP. LOVE IT!!

Answer 7

Beautiful! However, the use of words so much really takes the power away from it. Maybe say it at the very beginning than just use the rest of the sentence without 'words'.

Answer 8

i like its

deep and makes people think

u have potential for sure

Answer 9

word! =]