So i wrote this poem for someone i care about. please read and rate please!!!!?

Question

are you the one i waited for

the one who will treat me right

the person who can make me quiver

when you say my name just right

will you be there with me

be there and hold me tight

be with me through tough times

to let me know your by my side

and when i wake each morning

will you be my first sight

and right befor bed

will you be the last to say goodnight

would you kow that your my weakness

the only one who could bring me to my knees

and would you know how to exploit that

that i would only need to hear your sweet voice say please

do you know that when i say i love you

its more than just words coming from me

im saying i cannot resistt ou so its meant to be

Answer 1

It's wonderful, very touching!

I think everyone can relate to it :)

I know I can...

Great job!!<3

Answer 2

OMG!!

Thats realy sweet

I think that person will love it!

I no i did!

Answer 3

What a beautiful poem so heart felt i wish I could write like that. 10 out of 10 well done.

Answer 4

Beautiful.  I wish I was that special person.

Really, a very nice and well thought out poem, and significant in a literary sense.

Answer 5

awww that is sooo cute! id give it a 9!