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Some feedback on this "thing" i wrote please? and no silly comments please thank you?

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What is life really about? Sometimes we ask ourselves that question at least once during a lifetime. I asked myself this question yesterday, the day before and now today as I am writing this, I still question myself. Is life about how we’re created? One small cell that develops into what we are now? Is life about populating the world, creating more so that our genes gets passed on? Is life about living it to the max? Going out at night? Doing drugs? Gaining experience from what we do the mistakes we make and learn from that? Or are we all actually aiming for that just one goal. That’s to find the perfect partner and have a happy ending. As a youngster we all looked forward to our birthdays, Christmas, holidays and sometimes even going to school because we get to see our mates or go to our favourite lesson. From a child comparing to teenage and to an adult prospective view, there isn’t much of a comparison. We all want to have fun whatever we’re doing. As a kid we want to have fun playing with our toys we received at Christmas, as a teenager we want to go out and get drunk with our mates, sharing that special moment and reflect to it as we get older, And as an adult sharing those special times with the one that we love the most and we’re willing to put our lives on the line just to see them succeed in life. But do we ask ourselves; what is the point of all of this. The world, being created, growing up, dying. What is the point of being born? Growing up from being a baby, turning into a teenager? Then get to an adult? At the end all we’re going to get is a life that sometimes we desired and sometimes we hate.

As we’re born, we are given jobs automatically. As a baby we’re meant to grow, As a kid we’re meant to learn, to enjoy our time as a youngster, As a teenager we’re meant to prepare ourselves for the future, ensure that we learn so one day we will have a decent job so that we can support a family and as an Adult we can live long enough to see our children graduate and tell ourselves that at that moment we are good parents because our children now can look after themselves, can earn a living doing something they love, have children of their own. But what we don’t know when we’re a kid or a teenager is that life is full of obstacles. Some people like to find their way round them and some like to take it as a challenge and go through it because once they have done so they know they could take the whole world on. But there are different types of obstacles that will trap us inside our own mind. Losing someone we loved is one type of obstacle that, us, human beings, finds it hard to get over because now we realise that this person’s gone. That person won’t be there when you need him/her the most; he/she won’t be there to share your laughter or cries with. What makes it worst is that you think to yourself what do I do now? There’s no one else who’s like him/her. All the memories we shared, all the things that happened and that we went through together, is this part of life aswell? To endure a lifetime of suffering every time his/her name is mentioned that brings flashbacks.

To get over someone that you know you needed to get through this life is hard no doubt about it. Losing this person is one thing but finding this individual is so hard to do. How you met, what you had in common, how you would start conversations with them and wouldn’t finish for hours, how being sat with them and not say a thing but just look at them and know that everything will be alright as long as you have that person. And if we lost this person or he/she haven’t been found yet we turn to other areas that could replace this emotional state by doing various things whether its to our own bodies or to other people. We turn to drugs, which ease the pain and takes away that horrid feeling even though we know the consequences of them, we put everything on the line for that just tiny moment of blur happiness. Or sometimes if the pain is so deep inside of us, it turns into anger and hatred. We attack things to take that anger and hatred out, and the way we do this is by attacking ourselves or other people. I might not have done so or been attacked but through the articles that are published, the news that are shown on T.V, people dying due to gang feuds or innocent victims losing their lives for no reason, the people that experienced this, share a type of hatred because they were victims and want revenge or their hatred has been building since they were an infant and as they grew up to witness things that was not meant for a child, abuse at home, abuse at school, to see violence at a delicate age and knowing that there is nothing, absolutely nothing you could do about it and as you grow older, you remind yourself what you saw, and that there was no one to help you there so whose here to help you now? Yes there might be the world’s top psychologist trying to read your mind, analyse every behaviour you’re making so it can actually relate to

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  1. i read it! wow its alot of reading! i wasn't going to read it to be honest but i read a few comments to sort of review what the topic of the essay (lol) you wrote would be about and the answers intrigued me!

    i think the topic is a brilliant one! as it just puts life in to perspective! its all c**p! theres no hope for anyone no matter how hard we all try to live the best life it will knock us down at one point as at one stage a loved one will leave us! its inevitable! as soon as we are born we a re destined to die!

    our time hear just created problems for future generations, animals, planets, solar systems! god knows what problems we are tully causing! but i guarentee we are not part of nature any more! we have all been nurtured in to our way of life!

    we are no longer brought up with the skills and knowledge to be strong enough through life! much of us will still be learning till our last days!

    its such a difficult topic to even discuss or have an opinion on!

    i loved what you wrote! i wasnt not judging your grammar as you can see mine aint that great lol!

    it was like been in your head! hearing your thoughts spill out on to the computer in words!

    i felt your emotions and your discust towards what life really is when you take all the good memorys and moments away! i loved it!

    yes many have said it is sad! but i feel that its more sad that most of usnever take a moment in life to think about life! to put ours in to perspective! instead we pay others to revela our inner thoughts from our sub-concious!

    if more people looked at the life from an angle that made it look like someone elses would they still live it! could they still go on further!

    great topic!

    i wish my friends would discuss things like this! i think they are ti heavy for them lol! aorry i went on! but i did read your essay lol!

    xxxxxxx


  2. GREAT WALL OF JUDAS!!! LOL

    This is yahoo answers, you should make it brief and try to make you paragraphs appealing to read.(make proper sentences)

    Or else only few will even bother to read those.

    Anyway Life is what you make it; and what do you think it is about is your choice. Personally Mine isn't about God and our lives purpose is not about kissing his as-s.

    True - about what you said life is a just both a cycle and paradox, and we can't do anything about it.

  3. a very complex question or simple depending on what you seek.

      at the lower end we have life!  that can be lived by instinct such as cats.fishes etc whom everyday accept life  as simply being  alive and respond with instinct.

    at the other end of the scale we look at human beings as having the greatest intellectual offerings and understanding ,yet we each wonder at some point in our lives ,why are we here or what is 'life' about.

      many find  solace or an answer in religion still others simply do not search for answers but float through life like flotsam  drifting on a current .

      everybody can look and either find or not find the answers the seek depending on what each of us has thinks IS the answer to life,the universe and everything.

      the pain caused by emotional  turmoil is matched by the happiness and joy we get from everything in life and other people.

      music is perhaps man's greatest  gift to each other with the written word a double edged sword.

      not everybody will get  an answer and some will not accept the answer they find.

      you have but a short duration on this planet and is it best not to wonder too hard or too long over some things over which we may never really know or be sure of the answer. to each of us it may be a different thing. Live.love and enjoy life for eternity is a very long time!  

  4. What is life really about?

    The answer is different for everyone.

    For me it's about being happy, finding fulfillment in the small things, as everything is getting so expensive we all need to take a step back and decide what is really important to us. Then act on those things and not what others think we should.

    Most of us will have a long life so our aim should be to be as happy and fulfilled as we can be, and not to have many regrets, live each day as it comes  some days will be great others horrible and some boring we need to have less of the boring ones.

    Have memories that are fun to recall in old age not a lifetime of unfulfilled dreams.  

  5. I'm guessing English is not your first language, there are structural errors you need to work on. Having said that the vocabulary is good enough.

    The paragraphs are too compressed, you miss out '?' when they would help the reader to understand.

    Who is your target reader?  The writing should be worded to suit them.

  6. i am a strong believer that life is what you put into it and on the way through life we are thrown some pretty hard challenges to deal with and they make us stronger, i question the same things as you do and i smile inside and think today i will ask the question and think about it and in 2 weeks time something else will happen and i will ask the same thing.  Bizzare!!!

  7. It's hard not to feel depressed when thinking about these things. It makes me feel like absolutely nothing matters. And if nothing matters...then what the h**l am I supposed to with the 70 something years I have left on this planet? Go crawl in a hole and wait to die? Or should I just end it now? I mean, no point in living a pointless life, right?

    Depressing, indeed.

    The conclusion I've come to is that the only way for me to live a somewhat fulfilling life is to enjoy in life what I can, cut my losses, and somehow affect somebody else in a positive way. A few months ago, I would have felt that that was too simple, that there must be more. I'm not sure what I was hoping for, but whatever it was, I've come to the conclusion that it doesn't exist. Holy c**p, I'm sorry for this rant...

    I'll shut up now and recommend you check out some of Albert Camus's work.

    “You will never be happy if you continue to search for what happiness consists of. You will never live if you are looking for the meaning of life.” -Albert Camus

  8. how beautiful x u made me cry! how true too x

  9. Well, we don't HAVE to live. No one ever said that we have to live. We could all just kill ourselves...but most of us don't...So those of us that don't and just go on with life like we are suppost to have grasped the meaning of life. Living.  

  10. Dude, this took me ages to read and could be summarised by just saying life is challenging, finding a partner is the best way to find an answer, followed by a list of possibilities of what other obstacles are in this journey.

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