Someone help me please? Is this correct?

Question

I’ve never been in Brazil, but it seems a beautiful country, but I’m not sure if I’ll go to there next year, my sister is thinking about save money to buy a car, so I’m not sure about that.

And, how was the wedding?

Music management? Wow that’s awesome! Too bad that is expensive, here we don’t have that problem, the education is free here (if you study in the public unervesity), but I’m not sure about music management..

Right now I’m having the year off, but just this year lol, I guess I’ll Start studing english in march, and next year I’ll start working too,so I'll be able to save money :)

You're right! It would be awesome if we were closer, almost all of my friends doesn't like my taste in music. They like cumbia, and I hate cumbia.

Answer 1

You need a blog....and maybe a life.

Answer 2

I made a few changes.  It's not bad!  Some of your sentences are too long and needed to be broken up.  In the first paragraph, you might want to add a word like "but" or "because" to make the connection clear between going to Brazil and your sister buying a car.

I’ve never been to Brazil, but it seems like a beautiful country.  I’m not sure if I’ll go there next year.  My sister is thinking about saving money to buy a car, so I’m not sure about that.

How was the wedding?

Music management? Wow that’s awesome! Too bad that is expensive. We don’t have that problem here because education is free (if you attend a public university), but I’m not sure about music management.

Right now I’m taking the year off, but just this year lol. I guess I’ll start studying English in March, and next year I’ll start working too, so I'll be able to save money :)

You're right! It would be awesome if we were closer.  almost none of my friends like my taste in music. They like cumbia, and I hate cumbia.