Something i wrote do you like it?

Question

i have a friend i would die without i want her there to be on mi sweet 16 wen i turn 21 on mi wedding day the day of mi funeral because i dont want to even think about liven a day with out her that friends broke mi heart and left she made me cry she made me laugh i remember the first day we met she was sitting wit another girl and the first question she every asked me was if i had ever gone to the dentist that was the first time she made me laugh from that day on we have never been seperated for more then a day till the 10th of the 8th that day was the first time she made me cry because i knew i wasnt going to see her again for a while

so make me laugh again and come back

Answer 1

its nice

Answer 2

I like it..

answer mine please

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Answer 3

Its pretty good, sounds sad.

Reminds me of my ex best friend and how we don't talk anymore.

Keep writing.. you may have a talent.

Good Luck with it ! =)