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Song Lyrics! HELP?!?!?!?

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i wrote a song, what do you guys think??

all i ever wanted, i see it in his eyes

everything i am, i see it in his smile

he's the only thing that makes my heart feel glad, everytime

i see him standin there

and i wonder

ohhhhh, what do i have to do for him to notice me?

ohhhhh, what do i have to be for him to see the real me?

(as i am)

i want him to know

(i need him to hear)

just these three little words

and for me to know he's right here beside me

just these three little words

to prove my heart is true

three little words... and he's mine

he makes me laugh

and he makes me cry

sometimes i ain't sure of what he really means

but all i know is in his eyes

all i need to be is in his grin

he really is my shining knight

the only thing i dream about at night

just starin at the stars

what's is gonan take for him to see

to see me, notice me?

but all he needs to know is my three word promise

and i need to know he feels the same

sometimes he makes me laugh

he makes me cry

and i'm never really sure which side i'm supposed to buy

but all i want, is in his eyes

everything i am is in his smile

and all the proof i need just takes one kiss

and three little words

just to know he's right here next to me

then i can look him in the eye and say

just those three little words

(three words is all it takes)

three words

(and my heart can finally heal)

three little words... and he's mine

if you don't like it than please give me some suggestions i would really appreciate it. i know i'm not very good :P

i was thinking about filming myself singing it and posting on Youtube, do you guys think i should?? Thanks so much :)

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  1. they r awesome

    did u write it about an experience in ur life.

    wateva u did it is awesome

    plz answer my poll


  2. very good job

  3. OMG I LOVE IT!

    You should so post it on youtube, and then send me the video of it!

    Are you going to play it with the piano?


  4. It's really good...holly c**p

    the only part i don't like its were you keep saying "little"

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