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Song anygood?

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the plunge eventually

we're going in, we're going in

the fog is rolling in

sound the fog horn, save the ship

a hurricane's blown up

board em up and pack your stuff

sirens will sound again

another crowing victim

The tides will turn again

just like the shifting sands

the angels in the heavens laugh

at our attempt to simplify

A complex world

and a complex self

there's moreto us than

heads and tails

flip a coin for left or right

vertical means I am right

And when you recognize the ties

between yourself and fantasize

that you see he cliffs ahead

you'll take the plunge eventualy

The plunge eventually

we're going in, we're going in

The waves are crashing down

Keep you head above the crown

Footings gone andbyou can't swim

find some ground to stand or else

the sirens will sound again

another drowning victim

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  1. really good. very metaphoric. very deep and emotional. very well done. bravo vredesbyrd. *clapclapclap*


  2. The funny thing is that this song reads like a poem, which means that if you made it into a song, it would sound that much better!  

    "The tides will turn again

    just like the shifting sands

    the angels in the heavens laugh

    at our attempt to simplify" - This sounds like it would be the chorus.

    Nice job:)  I was trying to imagine a rhythm in my head while I was reading it, and I came up with a few, all of which, because of your words, would make a nice song.
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