Song writing please help!!!!!!?

Question

Hey guys i need help tell me if this song sounds good ok here:

1st verse: i'm always the one to be left out

it's like i'm not even here

my life is just a picture

2nd verse: I know hoe it feels to be left out

but you don't know how it feels to be outside the crowd

i know it's just me,myself,and I

3rd verse: I'm always sitting out during special events

your always center stage

you never seem to notcie

these small things

2nd verse

20 seconds of instruments

4th verse: I'm me,myself and I but your just

Everyone,myself,and us all

But now i'm center stage so listen

2nd verse

5th verse: Me,Myself and I

all by yourself now

but i'm everyone,myself and us all

So Join in!

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Answer 1

dats hot & im serious.u should record dat then copyright it.

Answer 2

its alright. I'm sure it'd sound fine with a guitar if you play...

Answer 3

1. its good

2. dont post songs you've written on the net, if they are very good they'll get stolen by high profile record companies and u wont get anything.