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let me know what you think...not about me or anything about the poem and the quality. constructive criticism is always welcome :)EternallyWhen i look into your eyes,i see one thingi see usBut we can never beyou and mecan never be eternallyYou tell me you've triedand i know that you havebecause when i look at you, i can see how much you've criedyou hold my hand and refuse to let gobut in our hearts we both knowyou and me can never be eternallyYou are gone nowand so am Ibut I'll never forget that day we criedthat last day i looked in your eyesand i didn't see usi didn't see youi didn't see meyou and mecan never be eternallySo now i lay me down to sleepi pray the lord my soul to keepand although you and me will never beknow that i love you eternally.
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