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Spanish grammer help! short paragraphs proofread!?

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hey! i'm working on a spnish paper and need hlep looking over the grammer.

this is what i wrote IN ENGLISH:

The law would have to meet the demands of several people. The law would have to be careful on its rules. What if a woman is pregnant? Will she be forced to serve? If so then when will she be given leave to have her child? What happens if that women dies? How will the government deal with that angry family? This is just one extreme case the law would have to address. There are dozens of similar details that would have to be made. Congress will not be able to fit all these needs.

A mandatory military service would not be effective. There are too many negative factors working against it. Even if the law did pass it would weaken the military of the United States and make it vunerable.

this is how i trranslated it to SPANISH:

El ley necesitará satisfacer los pedidos de muchas personas y tendrá muchas reglas. ¿Qué sí un mujer está embarazada? ¿Ella deba server su país? ¿Qué occuriríá sí ella morir? ¿Cómo el gobierno se efrentará su familia? Este solo un caso el ley requerirá dedicarse a algo. El Congreso no puede concordar con todos ellos.

Un servicio military obligatorio para hombres y mujeres no sea efectivo. Hay demasiado factores negativos. Incluso si el ley pasa, debilitaría el military considerablamente.

***Please look this over and check the grammer. thnaks!

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  1. I'm going to do 2 things. I'll translate the paragraph and improve the language to some extent, and then I'll give you some 'feedback'.

    1) La ley tendrá que suplir las demandas de muchas personas y tendrá que ser muy cautelosa. ¿Qué pasará si una mujer se embaraza? Siendo así, ¿Será ella forzada a servir su país? ¿Cuándo le será dado el permiso de maternidad? ¿Qué pasará si la mujer muere? ¿Cómo enfrentará el gobierno a una familia enfurecida? Éste es uno de los casos extremos que la ley tendrá que resolver. Existen docenas de detalles similares que tendrán que tenerse en cuenta. El congreso no podrá satisfacer todas estas necesidades.

    El servicio militar mandatorio no será efectivo, puesto que hay muchos factores negativos en contra de éste. Incluso, si la ley exigiese el servicio militar mandatorio, debilitaría la armada de los Estados Unidos, haciéndola vulnerable.

    2) Most of the problems with your translation are with the conjugation of verbs and the formulation of questions (misplaced orthographic accents and word order). You also should strive not to affect the translation lexically.

    Cheers!!


  2. In the beginning of the paragraph "El ley" is supposed to be "La ley"  

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