Stuffed Animals...my poem..thoughts?

Question

Stuffed Animals

Lying in my bed,

Feeling all alone,

No one on this Earth,

Can make me feel at home.

All my so called friends,

they backstab and they lie,

They feed upon my weaknesses,

Until I'm hollowed out inside.

My family'd be better off without me,

They all just want me gone,

My mom says I am worthless,

Dad has no opinion of his own.

The only things that give me comfort,

Who guide me through my torment,

A yellow bunny named rabbit,

And Robin, a worn blue elephant.

-Silent Anger-

Answer 1

Ouite frankly, I think this poem is more than a tad cliched.  The entire first stanza is probably in every emo poem I have ever read.  I'm sorry, but I kind of get sick of all these poems about people complaining about life.

Answer 2

It ain't easy growing up, but you'll make it.

Structure of poem is good, now lets hear some happy feelins too.

Answer 3

It has been written by alot of people, I wrote one just like it, but would never expose it, because I don't have the guts to do it like you do. We all have the same experience.

Answer 4

Well said - your thoughts are well defined and you have written in a fine manner. Your meter is also good.  You have a talent ♥