Summer High................a poem, care to comment?

Question

Summer high

Dappled sky watches, silent witness

Ship with nowhere to go

Set adrift with the tide ever shifting

On a glassy endless sea

Shimmering reflections

Lift gulls higher, soaring further

Haunting cries piercing the air

Lingering, seering Summer scene

Answer 1

I love it cool

Answer 2

You just described my favorite beach, J!  I like your imagery in both stanzas.  High Summer is here!

Answer 3

Anyone that speellls seering wrong is probably see ring sompthing!  lol  We forgive you, alliteratively speaking!  Good one.

Answer 4

cool.

Answer 5

"Water, water everywhere, nor any drop to drink."