Summer without you (poem please comment/rate)?

Question

the sun beams down with glorious heat.

wind whistling through the trees .

birds sing the song of summer

and trees flaunt there beautiful leaves.

the old swing i'm dreaming in creaks and moans.

the smell of abundant flowers caresses my nose.

an almost perfect summer,

if only you were here.

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Answer 1

it seemed thoughtful and good i think you have a good poem keep it going

Answer 2

instering and well thought of.if you made that up by yourself that is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO kewl!!!(kewl means cool)

Answer 3

Well, if you like it that&#039;s what&#039;s important .

Answer 4

i think you should make it a little longer, and more meaningful. i didnt feel anything when i read it. good luck

Answer 5

thats a very good poem... good job.... i really like it

Answer 6

too cliche, sorry