Sun-Son Trigee: Do you like it?

Question

Sorry to those who've seen this already, it was removed.

Suns arise............Sons survive

Over battlefields.....No mother knows

Just where............Her child lives

He survives...........Strumming his guitar

Answer 1

I know a place where everything is in ink. No deleting.

Answer 2

This is as heartwarming as it is beautiful.  Great Job!!

Answer 3

And it's still wonderful...why was it removed?  Good grief!

Answer 4

It's a touching poem, and it

holds the truth.  

I liked reading it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cL22Cwo-S...

Answer 5

it really good..... i don't understand why you removed it  

Answer 6

Well, if it is going to be removed again, I will get in quick with a response.

I like the Trigee's final reading across the lines, better than the verses one after the other as they don't run on quite as smoothly as they could.

Suns arise

Sons survive

Over battlefields

No mother knows

Just where

Her child lives

He survives

Strumming his guitar

Suns arise

Over battlefields

Just where

He survives

Sons survive

No mother knows

Her child lives

Strumming his guitar  

I hate not giving a total thumbs-up for your hard work, but I have to always be honest in my critiques.

......this is one for your family archives as it is so personal (again!)

Answer 7

By George you've done it. You've really done it... alright chaps all together... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray... Hip Hip Hooray...

and a pleasant evening to you and yours Madam Rennie.

Answer 8

It should not have been removed! Ever! At all. *yells at yahoo people, turns to Reenie and smiles*. I feel better now. This is beautiful, and it would appear that both of our soldiers are musicians. For some reason, music and war seem to juxtapose beautifully. I'm praying for all the sons, husbands, brothers, fathers, mothers, sisters, wives, and others out on foreign fields. God bless you all.