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Superhero!?

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She doesn't wear black rubber

or bold red ad blue tights

She doesn't have a spider sense

or evil geniuses to fight

She doesn't have a utility belt

or automatic claws

She isn't an alien for krypton

no, she's got some human flaws

She can't slay vampires

and she can't use the force

She doesn't fight the matrix

or have a diet cola to endorse

She can't control the weather

or levitate high and low

Nor turn green when she gets mad

but she is my superhero

She is not a psychic

but what I hide she can see

She can't teleport herself and yet

she is always somehow there for me

She has no power over water

so there is no sea to part

She doesn't have x-ray vision

but knows what's on my heart

She doesn't have an invisible plane

nope, not the Superman I like

She doesn't own a bat mobile

just a 12-speed mountain bike

She doesn't have a lasso of truth

or a signal in the sky

But she still flies over just in time

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to wipe my tears when I cry

She doesn't have laser vision

or talk to animals of any kind

She isn't telepathic

but can always read my mind

She can't control fire

or have the ability to heal

The only super thing about her

is the way she makes me feel

She might not be a superhuman

but she always makes me feel good

And if she could fly to my rescue

both God and I know she would

You might think she is a nobody

just your average sort of joe

But I tell you what, you're wrong

Sophia Wyatt is my Superhero!!

It took me a while to make and no, I'm not a *** for making poetry I just wanted to express how I felt. I appreciate any comments. Thanks.

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  1. This is a good experiment, but I would try writing it again, from a different perspective--maybe that of her mortal enemy, or her mom, or herself. Also, don't be afraid to work with the style. This form, while popular with beginning poets, is tough to make very interesting because no matter how good a writer you are, it always sounds "sing-songy."


  2. E-X-C-E-L-L-E-N-T poem!

    Different, funny, and sweet! Great work. Keep writing.

  3. Wow that was really good, great job man its so different from all the sad poems I read but in a good way. anyways dude you have talent I hope you keep writting. A+ work. =)

  4. lol this was an awesome poem! its cool because shes different then everyone. :]
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