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Gaze on the sky

When it is midnight

Smile at the twinkling stars

They will smile to you

If you really love me.

If you feel me

You will feel me

within you

Gaze on the sky

When it is midnight.

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Atrocious
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i like it. its pretty cute.. =)
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Your poem is very original. Sweet too.
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cute :) and to the sugar glider lover guy thats lame
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it's ok. you sould use longer phrases and better rhyming, but the idea of your poem is good. keep writing. the more you write the easyer it is and the better you get.

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it is cute but its also very devoid of anything deopthy srry. the repition of the introductory ciouplet is boring.
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duuudddeee...i dont like u like that...srry

and i absolutley DONT want 2 feel u man!!! u lil nasty!
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I LOVE IT!!!

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This is nice i like it.
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That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have a rare talent, wow!
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its not horrible but no bad
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on a scale of 1 beingthe worst and 10 bein the best i give it a 3

sorry but i am more into dark poems so that may be y
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