Tell Me Your Opinions On My Poem Please?

Question

I just wrote it for this contest like 5 minutes agohttp://allpoetry.com/contest/2412877

Is my poem bad?

Do You Like It?

What do you think of my poem?

http://allpoetry.com/poem/4410529

Answer 1

i  really like your poem, it's nice. i can sense that you're a pet lover. i'm sure you can also make a poem for a baby in the picture.

Answer 2

i really like this poem. i get the feeling of care and being protective from it. good job!

Answer 3

I think this is a beautiful poem.

The visualization is stunning.

The ONLY thing is to change that one line,

where it says "goodbye" and "side" in the same line.

Because it seems to rhyme when reading it, but because

nothing else rhymes it doesn't fit.

Just change it to something simple, like "I stayed with

you."

Good Luck. :]

Answer 4

i like the concept and the story is beautiful but i think you need to word it better and describe things deeper.

Answer 5

Poetry is a higly subjective art...if your poem makes

you happy that's all that should matter...unless you are

looking to pubish, which is a different thing altogether.

Answer 6

i like it. i personally thing it meets all three things u should talk about, playful sweet and innocent. and i think a baby covers all of that.

hope i helped =p