Tell me if u like my poem plz... :)?

Question

Where art thou mine love?

Thee who fell from the heavens above?

the hunger for thee strengthens, as i cry saffire tears from mine eyes.

Mine heart for art still beating to mine surprise.

Thee might not no how i feel, The feeling inside of me for art as strong as steel.

mine heart fror art beating quickly and slow. what to do next, I do not know.

Answer 1

[♥]

Answer 2

ehh ive seeneth bettereth

Answer 3

I <3 It!:D

Answer 4

:-(

Answer 5

i thnk it really good u have a good talent keep it up i think u are great!

Answer 6

NIce one ♥♥♥

Answer 7

Nice effort.Need more effort. Develop yourself more.

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Answer 8

Crazy Duck,

One minute your as strong as steel and the next you are unsure? This is your love! You must work, sweat, toil, bleed and fight to the death for it! Are you to climb 1999 steps to get to the last one and admit failure and weakness not to reach the end of your journey? I DON'T THINK SO...

Answer 9

I think its really good.

i dont really know how to critise poetry because i am only 13, but i do write poetry myself and i think this is good. i really like your ryhming scheme. i like the concept

check out my poem question!

plz!

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Answer 10

Doesn't matter what I think of it, the point is did it give you joy to write it??

It's OK, but keep it up and it'll get better. even more joy  . .I liked the second line best.

The pen having writ, moves on . . . . .

Answer 11

nice one, yes