Tell me something you think about this poem?

Question

Rain falls straighter

than the words i wrote

this is a hater

and i want an ignored vote

Answer 1

so you don;t like writing poems while it is raining

Answer 2

Maybe I'm just not intelligent enough for this, but to me it just sounds like you tried to rhyme it and when you try too hard to rhyme it loses some of its meaning, but that's just my opinion.