Tell me what u think about this poem?

Question

wishing for ui think of u all the time, i think one day we will be toghther forever but this does not come true for u are far from me,i can wish upon the shooting stars but i will never be with u.so i sit here waiting for one day that i will see u & tell u how much u mean to me.for u are like other guy u are a great that deserves a great girl & i guess it me or some one else but i will always luv u for the rest of my life.

Answer 1

I think you have to work on the formatting and you have to spell out the words.  You might have to condense some sentences to make it flow more easily.  Keep writing and you will get better.  

Answer 2

It's a nice poem, touching

emotionally.  I liked it.

However, cut-out some words,

and be specific.

Take a look:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dhL6PcxeJ...